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First off, let me say that this photo really appeals to me and gives me a nice, warm feeling. Having said that, I would like to point out the following, that in my opinion, is missing or 'a bit off':- The sun is, at least on my screen, burnt out. It's so bright that it steals too much of the attention as well and it has a green-ish halo.

- I'd like to see the mountain / forest below the sun a bit brighter. Maybe open up the shadows a bit and tone down the rays of light coming down on it.

- Lastly, I think I'd, personally, woud've cropped a cm from the bottom and up.

Overall a really nice picture in my eyes! Well done!

首先，照片很吸引我，让我有美好的温暖的感觉。然后，照片中有以下缺点不足：
第一，太阳过曝了，太夺人眼球，而且还有圈绿的光晕。
其次，太阳下面的山体太暗了，应该提亮出一些细节来，太阳光芒也可以适当压暗点
最后，个人意见，上下各裁剪一厘米

仁者乐山

Yifei:

A lovely scene, to be sure.  Your composition strikes me as a little busy, yet, paradoxically,  the lower right and left corners seem to contribute little to the graphical statement of the image.  Especially since the sunlight illuminates the lower right corner,  the emptiness there is pronounced.  Perhaps a slight crop using the same aspect ratio and starting in the upper left corner could bring the image back in balance.

The color is a bit overdone in my estimation.  The saturation is too strong and the blue of the shadowed area looks unnatural.  I'd recommend scaling back the color in these respects.  Your image is beautiful enough without needing to push the color past the natural ambiance.  If you shot this in RAW, consider pulling back on the highlights around the sun just to reduce the halo effect.  

It would have been nice if the sky cooperated with more dynamic clouds, but you get what you get.  This is a wonderful spot you found and I hope you can get back to shoot some more.

非常好的场景，但是构图太复杂了，看的时候眼睛会顾此失彼，左下角和右下角对照片却没啥贡献。尤其是右下角被太阳一照亮，更显得空了。建议进行裁剪，保留长宽比，下部和右边各裁掉一些。
色彩太过了。饱和度太高，阴影下的蓝色看着不自然。不如把饱和度调低一些。画面已经够美了，不需要把颜色调这么过。既然是raw拍的，那么把太阳周围的高光再压一下吧，减轻一下光晕。
如果天空配合一些动态的云彩，画面的效果会非常棒。但是拍到啥就是啥了。这是你的点，希望能在回去拍更多

然荻

第一张片子的看点在色调和层次，我个人更喜欢第一张的色调，你重新调整以后的反而觉得有重，这个环境是想给人一种淡雅清新的感觉，重了以后，有点乌云压力那种感觉了。以第一张为基础，再清淡一点为好，尤其是右边这几处山尖。
我更主要的是觉得这张片子的布局不太合理，刚才讲了，看点是色调和层次，层次来说，右边这片的层次分明，比较美观，片子的左边则没有多少层次和东西，但是片子现在左边占据的空间比较大，在空间分布上，重心往右边一侧偏的比较厉害，画面不平衡，也使得右边层次表现的视觉焦点被分散了。在拍摄的时候，我想我可能会机器往右转一点，主要表现层次好的这部分。后期裁剪的话，我个人的看法也是尽力舍弃左边，让层次好的这一部分再靠近中间一些，使目力集中，片子也平衡一些，左边留出一点内容能表现出环境就可以了。

然荻

如果画面比例不改变，还真不大好裁剪，我把比例稍微改动了一点，尽力压了一块天空，这个天上没什么东西，我觉得留个出气就可以了。

仁者乐山

然管眼光就是好啊
一剪子下去片子好看多了

然荻

第二张片子，怎么后期我就不点评了，你就是给我RAW我也后期不出来，尤其你还是尼康的RAW，我就用DPP比较熟悉。我同样是感觉这张也分散，拍摄的时候不一定非得拍进太阳来啊，这个太阳太抢了，这种角度的光线就很漂亮了，片子的视觉焦点也是村子，我会选择这样：

然荻

另外，角度顶着侧逆光，片子有点泛白光，显得不大透，要是拍的时候，找个伞把相机遮住，多少能改善一点吧。

仁者乐山

然荻 发表于 2013-1-23 10:49
第二张片子，怎么后期我就不点评了，你就是给我RAW我也后期不出来，尤其你还是尼康的RAW，我就用DPP比较熟悉 ...

感谢然管费心点评
这样右边是不是也去一点好？太空了吧？

然荻

仁者乐山 发表于 2013-1-23 11:04
感谢然管费心点评
这样右边是不是也去一点好？太空了吧？

对对~~右边和上边再裁进去一点，让这个光束有从左上往右下贯穿的感觉。

仁者乐山

继续来吧
第二张日出的片子好像挺对老外的眼，点评的很多，翻译的那个累啊

Yifei,
This is such a beautiful capture! As a novice, I'm finding it hard to find potiental improvements. I love the haze, how it's bright where the sun rays hit, and then darker because parts of the village are still in the shadows. My favourite section of this entire image is at the mountains in the background and how they're different shades of warm pinks and oranges. My eye went right to the centre of the image, and it's a very pleasing and peaceful atmosphere.

As I study it more, the things I'd maybe work on would be the bottom left corner, and brighten it up just a little bit. It looks too dark compared to the rest of the image. The blues and purples in the shadows - as I do like them - could maybe be a little less saturated, and perhaps you could shift the blue hues to bluish-green and see how it turns out? I feel it could help those sections blend in more, still enhancing the shadows, but not distracting from other parts of the image.


片子很棒，作为新手，我很难指出片子如何在提高。喜欢被光束打亮山谷里的薄雾，以及明暗的对比。最喜欢的部分是背景的群山，各式各样的暖色调和层次。看片子的第一眼，我的目光集中在了画面的中部，非常美好宁静的氛围。
需要改进的地方可能是画面的左下部，稍微提亮一点就行。跟换面的其余部分比较起来，这里太暗了。阴影里的蓝紫色调应该也可以在淡一点。也可以试着把蓝色调调的暖一些看看如何。这样可以改进一下暗部，又不至于影响其他重点部分